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askpi
Jun 25, 2012, 11:06 PM
Health Guide: FirstAid is an firstaid app with a twist. The has over 40 first aid situations. App is designed with concepts burrowed from another platform.

The app will be out in the App Store soon.

What do you think

Screenshots

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By kalanaj (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/kalanaj) at 2012-06-25

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shyam09
Jun 25, 2012, 11:53 PM
just off the top of my head, i think you should create subtitles that describe the paragraph. otherwise it's just a bunch of words...

Dobiewonkanobie
Jun 26, 2012, 12:08 AM
This looks more educational than as a first aid manual.

Time is of the essence. For a first aid situation it looks like too much to read there. I can imagine scrolling through a-z pictures/titles to find what you want taking too long. Most situations can be broken into a handful of categories (random examples: respiratory, bites, broken bones, etc), and specifics listed there.

just off the top of my head, i think you should create subtitles that describe the paragraph. otherwise it's just a bunch of words...

This as well. Once you find your specific problem (a dog bite) the first aid solutions should be straight forward and easy to identify in easy to read steps.

shyam09
Jun 26, 2012, 02:32 AM
Here an idea:
Instead of having one big read, make ~3-4 big orange buttons (for example sake). Each one has a Title like: General, Treatment, Symptoms, Home Remedies, etc. and when you click it it "vertically stretches to reveal a bulletted list of stuff

Also, just mention the really important ones [and have an "even more" option or something if you want]...

Finally, we are only giving suggestions based on two pictures you provided. One was of the UI and the other was a more specific example. Neither tell us how intuitive, or how "worthwhile" it is in a given situation. That's why I would honestly recommend handing out promo codes for this app [you can give them out in the code and promotions category on MR; i believe developers get their hands on a few promo codes for their apps. Use these promo codes to get reviews and ratings]

askpi
Jun 27, 2012, 12:27 AM
Hello,

Thanks for the feedback. I wanted this app to part education and part health guide. I have already submitted the app to the App Store for review few days ago. I will hand out several promo codes when it comes out. I will look consider your suggestion for the next app update.


Here an idea:
Instead of having one big read, make ~3-4 big orange buttons (for example sake). Each one has a Title like: General, Treatment, Symptoms, Home Remedies, etc. and when you click it it "vertically stretches to reveal a bulletted list of stuff

Also, just mention the really important ones [and have an "even more" option or something if you want]...

Finally, we are only giving suggestions based on two pictures you provided. One was of the UI and the other was a more specific example. Neither tell us how intuitive, or how "worthwhile" it is in a given situation. That's why I would honestly recommend handing out promo codes for this app [you can give them out in the code and promotions category on MR; i believe developers get their hands on a few promo codes for their apps. Use these promo codes to get reviews and ratings]

askpi
Jul 4, 2012, 03:27 PM
I have implemented several changes mentioned earlier. Also I added a new feature where the app provides daily health tips.

Here are the screenshots

http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/3879/img0633ip.jpg
By kalanaj (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/kalanaj)

http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/51/img0634j.jpg
By kalanaj (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/kalanaj)

http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/2540/img0635ko.jpg
By kalanaj (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/kalanaj)


What do you think?