Birthday Cake

[ldenman]

Tell me what you think about this song.
I recorded with garageband.

http://www.csjdca.com/ldenman/Click%20Here%20For%20Music/Click%20Here%20For%20Music/BirthdayCake.mp3

Constructive Criticism Please.

[beatsme]

couldn't get to it

[ldenman]

the link has been updated.
sorry.

[zimv20]

lots of clicking and ticking in there. i'd guess it's either a clocking issue or bad matching of loop points. plus, i hear some lip smacking going on. too much compression? too hyped of a mic?

however, i like the song.

nice job.

btw -- the song stopped loading about 80% of the way through. probably just a one-off load error, but i mention it in case anyone else runs into the problem.

[The Truth]

Wow, that is one depressing birthday song... great job. I couldn't hear any clicking or ticking (or loops either for the matter). Compression and levels are fine, the only thing I could pick on is the slight fuzzy backgroound noise.

[zimv20]

I couldn't hear any clicking or ticking
an example: for the line "you're going off to college soon", there's a couple after the word "soon".

slight fuzzy backgroound noise.
yes, the noise floor is really high. sounds like the preamp was cranked, or compressor gain.