View Full Version : Newsletter Critique - Shane
Aug 30, 2006, 05:08 PM
This is the company I work for and need some other eyes on this project, comments welcomed! Thank You :)
Front / Back
Inside Left / Right
Aug 30, 2006, 06:13 PM
Not much to say, other than the colors are very good. The only thing I dont like is the rounded black corner on inside page 2. It doesnt fit there, at least in my eyes
Aug 31, 2006, 03:45 AM
I agree, not much to say. it looks really nice. only thing I might try - is add in some blue from the front into the inside.
Im not sure if I like the black corner as well...
Aug 31, 2006, 04:19 AM
In the spreads, knock back the drop shadows on the boxes by 15-30% and maybe in size as well. They're just too heavy IMO... squinting at a page will show you which elements are visually prominent and somehow I don't think the shadows are that important...
Also, adjust your H&Js (hyphenation and justification) for the body copy to allow a little hyphenation in the justified columns, maybe 1 or 2 in a row max. At the moment, you've got bunching up and also white rivers appearing in the type leading to an inconsistent colour.
If the H&J set won't 'read' and hyphenate the ipsum, then try a piece of genuine copy from elsewhere to see if that's working correctly.