Mac Tutorial Critique

[Aperture]

Hi Everyone, many months ago I wrote an article (http://www.myfirstmac.com/index.php/mac/articles/1-printer-for-your-mac-and-pc) about sharing printers between Macs & PCs. I got quite a few emails with questions, etc so I decided that I'd try to make a video tutorial out of part of it someday. Today I spent an hour or two putting it together and I just uploaded it to YouTube. This is my first time doing anything like this and I'd enjoy doing more if people find them useful. Anyway, I'd appreciate any criticism or ideas that you may have. Here is the link. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PY5-Ni7eCWw)

Thanks