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ZiggyPastorius
Apr 13, 2008, 03:52 PM
So I have this article due for my school newspaper, and I was wondering if anyone would be willing to proofread it for me, or if anyone knows anything about Journalistic style, give me some advice on it..Nothing too in-depth, I only have a few hours to work on it, but, anything you may have, feel free to share...

http://att.macrumors.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=112028&stc=1&d=1208119856

It's a doc file, so if you have pages or word...yeah...Just check it out if you feel like it, and if you find any spelling errors, or anything you think needs to be changed, or even just some general feedback, I'd like to hear it. Thanks everybody :)