First song made in Logic 8 - Check it out yo

[ghking]

i just got logic 8 and i made my first song in it today. Its kind of techno/tranceish. Theres no loops its all melodies i made up with the synths in logic. Since its got heavy drums (its techno) its better to listen to it in headphones or external speakers. Tell me what you think!

Link-
http://home.comcast.net/~xxxsinkemfastxxx/trance.mp3

Newer Version -
http://home.comcast.net/~xxxsinkemfastxxx/trance4.mp3

[DJJONES]

i like it!!!!:)

what i dont like is the kick.

but other then that nice creation man.

[ghking]

thanks
yea im still mixing it

[3rdpath]

nice track

good use of dynamics too.

be sure and post your finished mix-i'd like to hear it.

[ghking]

what should i do to the kick DJ im kindof stuck

[frankiepdx]

Not my style of music so I can't comment there. Impressive recording though. Please post more as I use Logic and love to see what others have done with the program.

Also, do you mix with monitors or headphones?

[ghking]

i use both definitely the monitors most of the time but if i want to crank it to get the full effect i use the headphones as to not damage the monitors with all the low end

[ghking]

new version
fixed kick (hopefully) Gave it more punch
also drums during chorus

http://home.comcast.net/~xxxsinkemfastxxx/trance4.mp3