Feedback needed on Apple Advert

[liketom]

Made it yesterday , posted the link but need feedback on it .

see what you think maybe we could have more ppl post there apple ads?


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tom

View My Apple Advert (http://www.liketom.co.uk/fab.mov) about 5.4mb in size

[KC9AIC]

Pretty good. I especially liked the music. I would have liked the text to move along a little faster, but that's just because I read fast.

[Krizoitz]

Not bad, but it appeared like the second line in all the text was smaller, especially when listing models. Should all be the same thing.

[voicegy]

In one of the lines, "it's" should be retyped as "its".

I don't like the music - its been done to death, and the movie 2001 almost always comes to mind when people hear it now. However, if you were to stick with that musical selection, images should be timed to the dramatic parts.

[stoid]

GAH! Static text! Make it move a little bit, in this case probably a little zoom effect will go miles. ;)

Great idea though (might want to check the facts on actual release times, i.e. PowerBooks started at 100 in 1991) Apple-History (http://www.apple-history.com) will help you there

[liketom]

Many thanks for feedback ,i have since scrapped it and done a new one ,rippied apart from the g5 intro vid hehe o well passed an hour or so maybe a little closer to the actual release .

have a look View NEW Apple ad (http://www.liketom.co.uk/iwantthatpowermac.mov)

[voicegy]

Hey you...that's one hell of an improvement. Font size too small, kind of lingers on black too much at the end - but comparitively speaking, I liked it so much I played it several times. :o