Just a hint...
I too prefer the first logo, with the word photography reined in a bit tracking-wise, and perhaps a bit larger. I like the handwritten one as well, but it doesn't "hang together". I won't say too much about style - to each his own, but I will say something that may help you in your design process. Design your logo in black-on-white first. Get the design right in one colour first, then you can colorize to your heart's content. Eventually, one day, you will have to print your logo in one colour only, and you will regret not having done this in the first place. By the way, your logo should reverse properly too, i.e., when you flip the logo into negative, it should still read well - never know when you'll have to reverse the font out of a black background. I've been designing logos for forty years, and I learned this rule from a guy who was doing it long before me. I don't have many design rules - but this is one I have never regretted learning!
dmz