Need help designing an image please

[G4scott]

Hello all!

I need some help. I have been selected to design a shirt for my Trumpet section, and I need your opinions on what I have come up with so far.

You can download a .pdf of my work so far here:
http://homepage.mac.com/g4scott/trumpetshirt.pdf

The design is going to be on a white shirt, and there is going to be a bulldog on the podium in the center...

I'd greatly appreciate it if anyone here with graphics design experience would comment on my design. Thanks!

[krossfyter]

the yellow jackets marching band rules!!!!

nah... heh.


but yeah man looks cool. how much liberty do you have on this design? if anything i would just suggest being a bit more informal with it to make it visually more intresting. but if not then thats fine.

[vniow]

I don't know ***** about graphic design, but yellow and purple are not the best colors to go together. Unless that's your Trumpet section's colors, of course. :)

[krossfyter]

yeah i think mc allen highs colors are yellow and purple. if i can remember correctly. school colors man.

[G4scott]

purple and gold are our school colors... I might make the yellow a bit darker to make it look more gold. Besides, the bulldog is also going to be a shade of yellow/gold (trust me, it works...) so it'll only have 4 colors... Dark grey, light grey, purple, and gold/yellow (and possibly black...)

As for the yellow jackets... Edcouch-Elsa is a pretty small town... Of course that's why they're a 4A school :p My school is a 5A school, but my dad's band has a marching contest in Edcouch-Elsa because they're 4A...

[vniow]

Okay, color aside, this was drawn by my extremely limited artistic skills, but i think the column should look more like this: