Everybody's Dream

[britboy]

So... my tar makes me dissappear. How many people have wished that? :p

Took me a few attempts to get something passable, but it got my third and final entry in. Any comments, suggestions, before the polls close tonight?

[jelloshotsrule]

wow. the first part's great.

the britboy image is just a bit hard to read the top right of. i mean, we know what it says. but if you can fix that, that's all i'd say.

in the meantime, did you catch mine? suggestions? a delay has kept me from leaving for the us open yet so i have a tad bit of time if i need to resubmit.