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SchneiderMan
Sep 30, 2009, 06:00 PM
Hey so i made this banner in a few minutes and would appreciate it if you gave me some feedback on it, its for Speckproducts.com.

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/7759/speckbanner120x600bysch.png

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2720/speckbanner120x600.png

Well my banner was chosen and i won what ever i want from speck (: sweet. i dont know what they picked yet but ive sent them newer version so..



NoSmokingBandit
Sep 30, 2009, 06:03 PM
Use a heavier font, its a bit hard to see on a large monitor. Be careful on the right where the gradient gets lighter, some of the text gets very hard to read over there, specifically the K in "Speck" and the end of "shell."

You could probably get rid of the logos at the bottom and expand your text into that area.

SchneiderMan
Sep 30, 2009, 06:19 PM
OK ive changed the background, would this be better? and then to change some text?

Edit, nvm thanks

three
Oct 14, 2009, 10:04 PM
I personally would change the font of the "see thru hard shell case" text. It right now is hard to read.

sigmadog
Oct 14, 2009, 10:32 PM
Congratulations on winning. Whatever you get, make sure it wasn't dropped like the images in your banner.

decksnap
Oct 15, 2009, 12:46 PM
Nice, but what does it look like when you compress it to under 30k?

jessica.
Oct 15, 2009, 12:48 PM
The second one but the font is terrible (see thru ... etc). It is impossible to really read and when compressed it will look even worse.

Congrats on winning.

MattSepeta
Oct 15, 2009, 01:48 PM
Font is wayyyyyy too hard to read....

The thing looks really nice, and it may serve well for the purpose (techie site I am assuming, so they will have generally faster connections), but to get the size low enough, it will look like crap compressed.

Love the background, but I doubt it will look great when compressed.

Company name is not displayed prominently enough, imo.

Congrats on the contest win though!!

jdl8422
Oct 15, 2009, 02:46 PM
I'm not a fan of the way the gradient flows. I'd try a more subtle radial gradient. I also am not a fan of the light text.

Congratulations of winning. Looks like speck got some cheap labor out of you.