What do you think of this song

[fun173]

Today my friend and i recorded this song and a couple others, this was our favorite and we wanted to see if people liked it so i thought i would ask you all :)

I know the recording quality is not the best but we will re-do it soon.

What do you all think?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z0tTQe8qhJU

[Nugget]

Vocals are sort of flat and listless -- not much energy or emotion.

Otherwise, it's not really my style but you did a great job mixing it together. Thumbs up.

[fun173]

Thanks for the feedback :) i appreciate it

[HeavenlyYeti]

echoing the other guy, mixing is well done. I'd try to add more bass into it, though.

And the singing needs to be more dynamic, alive-feeling. Keep at it!:apple:

[MattSepeta]

The vocals are completely missing highs and lows...

And I did not hear any auto-tuning... What gives?

[fun173]

The vocals are completely missing highs and lows...

And I did not hear any auto-tuning... What gives?


Were kinda doing it ghetto lol, we only used garage band but when we re-record ill try to use auto tune. tbh, i had no idea what it was before your comment so thank you :D

[citizenzen]

It'll kill at the junior high spring talent show.

If the baton twirler drops it a few times, you just might nose her out of third place. [ouch]