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iostream.h
Oct 21, 2004, 09:19 PM
I'm making this site for my dad's dental office, and have just got the basics of it layed out. Please tell me what you think of it, and any suggestions.

Oh, and the code will validate when I'm done with it :)


http://isophonic.net/Website

EDIT: If you could also post the loading time, it would be appreciated.



davecuse
Oct 22, 2004, 06:52 AM
I like the overall container and look of the site. I would probably change the name to a graphic rather than plain text and use something that is a little more eye catching. Also I always prefer to give each menu item a little definition by breaking things up, rather than just text in a straight line. Also I like the colors, however you may want to consider dimming the background a little, so that the eye is drawn to the content, maybe it just looks that way because there is no content? Some dummy text from http://lipsum.com may help.

iostream.h
Oct 23, 2004, 12:36 AM
Ok, added a few things, tweaked the code (it should validate now!). Any better?

maradong
Oct 29, 2004, 05:10 AM
Yup,

But the Background Image is way to dominant, imho.

Validating the code is always a good thing to do. :)