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iMacBoy
Aug 15, 2010, 03:17 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/rjh85k.png

and

http://i33.tinypic.com/30vhytu.png



miles01110
Aug 15, 2010, 03:20 PM
Other than being a typical gawdy, in-your-face image signature, it's fine. I guess.

GoCubsGo
Aug 15, 2010, 03:21 PM
You can't use images in your sigs here.
As for the sig itself, like most image-type sigs it's very amateur and unoriginal.

advres
Aug 15, 2010, 03:24 PM
Think Different? Reeeaaallllyyyy???

iMacBoy
Aug 15, 2010, 03:24 PM
You can't use images in your sigs here.
As for the sig itself, like most image-type sigs it's very amateur and unoriginal.

Yeah, i know you can't use sigs on here but it was just a little something i did :P

Blue Velvet
Aug 15, 2010, 03:30 PM
For the first one:

• Kerning's too loose between A and Y
• Kerning's too tight between Y and L
• Needs more air between logotype and strap
• Strap could be in a heavier weight of Optima, if you have it
• Crown could do with a degree or two more tilt to right
• Crown could also do with a tiny bit more air between it and the O
• Really not sure about the combo of Futura (Demi?) and Optima
• Maybe try an informal script/hand for the strap?

iMacBoy
Aug 15, 2010, 03:34 PM
For the first one:

Kerning's too loose between A and Y
Kerning's too tight between Y and L
Needs more air between logotype and strap
Strap could be in a heavier weight of Optima, if you have it
Crown could do with a degree or two more tilt to right
Crown could also do with a tiny bit more air between it and the O
Really not sure about the combo of Futura (Demi?) and Optima
Maybe try an informal script/hand for the strap?

Thanks man,

Glad your not one of those people who just goes "It's ****" atleast you actually tell me how to solve it.

chrisvee
Aug 15, 2010, 03:47 PM
Although the logo doesn't really express the whole "Think Different" concept, I like it. Simple, clean, and elegant. As for suggestions, Blue Velvet pretty much summed it up.

Great job, keep it up. :)

iMacBoy
Aug 15, 2010, 03:51 PM
Although the logo doesn't really express the whole "Think Different" concept, I like it. Simple, clean, and elegant. As for suggestions, Blue Velvet pretty much summed it up.

Great job, keep it up. :)

Thanks, and, i just wanted a slogan to put there, so i figured 'Think Different' would fit nicely, it didn't like relate to the logo haha, but thanks.

eng42ine
Aug 18, 2010, 08:29 AM
Thanks ma'am,

Glad your not one of those people who just goes "It's ****" atleast you actually tell me how to solve it.

Fixed that for you..

milbournosphere
Aug 18, 2010, 03:09 PM
Because 'Think Different' has NEVER been overused...:rolleyes:
I would worry about the slogan before the logo. Apple already used it (it's essentially a meme at this point); find something new and original and make it yours.

Consultant
Aug 18, 2010, 03:52 PM
Because 'Think Different' has NEVER been overused...:rolleyes:
I would worry about the slogan before the logo. Apple already used it (it's essentially a meme at this point); find something new and original and make it yours.

Yeah. But "I can't think of a slogan so I am going to copy a popular one"
just doesn't sound the same.
;)

bluetooth
Aug 19, 2010, 05:55 AM
"THINK DIFFERENT". Well ask yourself, what's different? Nothing that I can see at the present time. Why not try something different/unique to help illustrate your concept/slogan? ie. Reverse the slogan type...do something, anything, otherwise it is not "different" is it? Just my 2 cents. :cool:

Oh and you should also follow BV's good advice.

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7879/30vhytu23.jpg

http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/3740/30vhytu2.jpg

http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/228/30vhytu.jpg