Seishin movie poster concept

ok so heres the concept poster to my short film that im making this year, wanted to know what you thought of it?

il add the synopsis swell, also note that the girl isnt fully done up in make up fx and will be done so very soon so the central picture will be changed.

Synopsis:
when the powerful Seishin fall from heaven to earth they are brought by fate to possess their destined human who will release them back to heaven by sacrificing themselves, but as time has passed humans have learned to utilise the Seishins power for their own use... fate has chosen the path of Kibo as the saviour of the Seishin but the almighty Furah plans to destroy him and capture the Seishin for his own use to rule the world especially Kibo's own Seishin from which he has been possessed.

Can Kibo stop him or will Furahs might and evil tricks put an end to the saviours quest..

matteusclement said:

Nice font.
Terrible photo.

Model looks drunk for starters.

Is it an action or a bed and breakfast set in a tree?

You need to IMPLY action if it is.

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really? why do you think the photo is bad?

and shes 12 so no not drunk shes a good but evil type of spirit.

it was just a test shot for collection.

im not sure what you mean by "Is it an action or a bed and breakfast set in a tree?"

thanks for the feedback though just what im looking for

It's re-anime, anime in real life, I appreciate your comments.

It's a sci-fi/ fantasy film about spirits as the synopsis says.

I remain upbeat about the poster though Iv had more positive comments than negative from random people.

I mean what would you have for a re-anime poster?

My target audience is Asia the Japanese to be exact, so I feel it stays in with their quality, just my opinion though.

The picture will be changed to a better one which will tell more about the film, at the moment it was just one I used from a test shoot

daybreak said:

Don't you think you are posting your advertisement in the wrong country?. You are very positive with all we say.
I still maintain your poster has not got that star quality.

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well i mean its zero budget, so its an indie film, i need perspectives to build up a general idea of what kind of people like this film and its contents and who doesn't.

but it is just a concept and i may change the top half of it and obviously have a much better photo in it which will tell the story more as you say.

matteusclement said:

I'll also add that if it's a zero budget film, drop the names of the "actors" to give you more space to work with in the poster.

But like i said, GOOD FONT.... TERRIBLE photo.

Reshoot the photo.

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Actually really good info, il remove the names and il have a better but not final photo on Saturday hopefully, I may put the names in small print at the bottom just to fill In the space.