Hi All,
This is my first script, please could you Critique it, I'm a month away from setting up shooting for it, i don't really wanna spend too much time editing this anymore, it is my first piece i have no knowledge of script writing so basically its as amateurish as it can get.
Thanks
www.slideshare.com/8salacious9/seishin
This is my first script, please could you Critique it, I'm a month away from setting up shooting for it, i don't really wanna spend too much time editing this anymore, it is my first piece i have no knowledge of script writing so basically its as amateurish as it can get.
Thanks
www.slideshare.com/8salacious9/seishin