
you did fine. You could have done away with the Zombie style extra. I think to promote any style off band one needs a certain style of music which will attract attention.
Lets just say in the 6os i worked with a world top group on two films and studied how the promoted their songs. Some was without instrument and some with.
If you study YouTube and look at all the music videos pick out which you like and feel you could have done better.
The beginning of your bed shoots could have done with a bit of light.
In general you did a good job. Sorry to say the song and location did not blend.
Musically they are very good but there was a element of we are it.
Next video you make. Use some close ups and use some slick editing. Work out a good script if they are singing a song and one can use the words for visual material.
I think you would like Final Cut Pro-X as you editing would be at your finger tips.
My apologies if i have offended you with any criticism