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iMacBoy

macrumors 6502
Original poster
Dec 24, 2009
363
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GoCubsGo

macrumors Nehalem
Feb 19, 2005
35,741
153
You can't use images in your sigs here.
As for the sig itself, like most image-type sigs it's very amateur and unoriginal.
 

iMacBoy

macrumors 6502
Original poster
Dec 24, 2009
363
0
You can't use images in your sigs here.
As for the sig itself, like most image-type sigs it's very amateur and unoriginal.

Yeah, i know you can't use sigs on here but it was just a little something i did :p
 

Blue Velvet

Moderator emeritus
Jul 4, 2004
21,929
265
For the first one:

• Kerning's too loose between A and Y
• Kerning's too tight between Y and L
• Needs more air between logotype and strap
• Strap could be in a heavier weight of Optima, if you have it
• Crown could do with a degree or two more tilt to right
• Crown could also do with a tiny bit more air between it and the O
• Really not sure about the combo of Futura (Demi?) and Optima
• Maybe try an informal script/hand for the strap?
 

iMacBoy

macrumors 6502
Original poster
Dec 24, 2009
363
0
For the first one:

• Kerning's too loose between A and Y
• Kerning's too tight between Y and L
• Needs more air between logotype and strap
• Strap could be in a heavier weight of Optima, if you have it
• Crown could do with a degree or two more tilt to right
• Crown could also do with a tiny bit more air between it and the O
• Really not sure about the combo of Futura (Demi?) and Optima
• Maybe try an informal script/hand for the strap?

Thanks man,

Glad your not one of those people who just goes "It's ****" atleast you actually tell me how to solve it.
 

chrisvee

macrumors regular
Jul 2, 2010
209
0
Winnipeg, Canada
Although the logo doesn't really express the whole "Think Different" concept, I like it. Simple, clean, and elegant. As for suggestions, Blue Velvet pretty much summed it up.

Great job, keep it up. :)
 

iMacBoy

macrumors 6502
Original poster
Dec 24, 2009
363
0
Although the logo doesn't really express the whole "Think Different" concept, I like it. Simple, clean, and elegant. As for suggestions, Blue Velvet pretty much summed it up.

Great job, keep it up. :)

Thanks, and, i just wanted a slogan to put there, so i figured 'Think Different' would fit nicely, it didn't like relate to the logo haha, but thanks.
 

milbournosphere

macrumors 6502a
Mar 3, 2009
857
1
San Diego, CA
Because 'Think Different' has NEVER been overused...:rolleyes:
I would worry about the slogan before the logo. Apple already used it (it's essentially a meme at this point); find something new and original and make it yours.
 

Consultant

macrumors G5
Jun 27, 2007
13,314
34
Because 'Think Different' has NEVER been overused...:rolleyes:
I would worry about the slogan before the logo. Apple already used it (it's essentially a meme at this point); find something new and original and make it yours.

Yeah. But "I can't think of a slogan so I am going to copy a popular one"
just doesn't sound the same.
;)
 

bluetooth

macrumors 6502a
May 1, 2007
662
1
Toronto
"THINK DIFFERENT". Well ask yourself, what's different? Nothing that I can see at the present time. Why not try something different/unique to help illustrate your concept/slogan? ie. Reverse the slogan type...do something, anything, otherwise it is not "different" is it? Just my 2 cents. :cool:

Oh and you should also follow BV's good advice.

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