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[Squilly]

I finished a tedious, 3 hour long graphic design in Photoshop today. Started at 5, finished at 8. What do you think? It's Retina resolution.

[citizenzen]

Originally Posted by Squilly

What do you think?

I'm curious why you describe it as "tedious". Three hours is not a lot of time to spend on a project.

Anyway ...

The type really, really needs help. The changing bevel is confusing. The font and color choice, uninspiring.

Question: why do you have a shadow underneath the prism, but not the type? The lack of consistency makes the two parts feel disconnected.

The color pyramids: pure red, green and blue are vibrant colors. I understand you're working with transparencies here, but those colors and shapes need to 'pop'. Right now it's too muted.

I really appreciate you bringing your work to the forum. Being critiqued is never an easy experience, but it will help you create better design.

[Squilly]

Originally Posted by citizenzen

I'm curious why you describe it as "tedious". Three hours is not a lot of time to spend on a project.

Anyway ...

The type really, really needs help. The changing bevel is confusing. The font and color choice, uninspiring.

Question: why do you have a shadow underneath the prism, but not the type? The lack of consistency makes the two parts feel disconnected.

The color pyramids: pure red, green and blue are vibrant colors. I understand you're working with transparencies here, but those colors and shapes need to 'pop'. Right now it's too muted.

What do you mean by the type? Thanks for the criticism
By tedious, I mean the longest I've ever worked on a render, three-fold.

[lucasgladding]

I'll agree with citizenzen about the time spent. Your perspective changes as you get older. A couple weeks ago I spent 15 hours experimenting with the new renderer in Blender before starting a project, and I enjoyed every minute.

There is something going on with the renderer where the shadows are concerned, so that might be worth looking into. Which program are you using?

I agree about the "uninspired" comment, but that comes as you learn more about fonts. If the exercise is in 3D, I wouldn't worry about it.

The perspective is the reason for the other comment. You might want to try an isometric camera if that's available, or rotate the text so the perspective doesn't affect the weight as much.

[Squilly]

Originally Posted by lucasgladding

I'll agree with citizenzen about the time spent. Your perspective changes as you get older. A couple weeks ago I spent 15 hours experimenting with the new renderer in Blender before starting a project, and I enjoyed every minute.

There is something going on with the renderer where the shadows are concerned, so that might be worth looking into. Which program are you using?

I agree about the "uninspired" comment, but that comes as you learn more about fonts. If the exercise is in 3D, I wouldn't worry about it.

The perspective is the reason for the other comment. You might want to try an isometric camera if that's available, or rotate the text so the perspective doesn't affect the weight as much.

Photoshop Extended CS6.

[heehee]

What are you trying to accomplish? Is it a school project learning Photoshop or learning Photoshop in general?

[Squilly]

Originally Posted by heehee

What are you trying to accomplish? Is it a school project learning Photoshop or learning Photoshop in general?

Just experimenting with it. I followed a YouTube video tutorial to create the render.

[heehee]

Originally Posted by Squilly

Just experimenting with it. I followed a YouTube video tutorial to create the render.

In that case, you should learn 3D programs like 3DS Max, Maya, Softimage, Cinema 4D, Lightwave etc. For "simple" renders like you posted, it'll take you a lot less time and far more accuracy with lighting and shadows.

It'll be worth it for your next "idea" as well since you need a mockup, schematics, and model for 3D printing.

Most have free downloads for you to try out.

[Squilly]

Originally Posted by heehee

In that case, you should learn 3D programs like 3DS Max, Maya, Softimage, Cinema 4D, Lightwave etc. For "simple" renders like you posted, it'll take you a lot less time and far more accuracy with lighting and shadows.

It'll be worth it for your next "idea" as well since you need a mockup, schematics, and model for 3D printing.

Most have free downloads for you to try out.

I have a trial for C4D, don't understand the software at all. Know PS a lot better...

[fig]

Originally Posted by Squilly

I have a trial for C4D, don't understand the software at all. Know PS a lot better...

Right...that's why he mentioned learning it

[MisterKeeks]

Originally Posted by citizenzen

I'm curious why you describe it as "tedious". Three hours is not a lot of time to spend on a project.

Anyway ...

The type really, really needs help. The changing bevel is confusing. The font and color choice, uninspiring.

Agreed. I could barely read it.

[lucasgladding]

Originally Posted by heehee

In that case, you should learn 3D programs like 3DS Max, Maya, Softimage, Cinema 4D, Lightwave etc. For "simple" renders like you posted, it'll take you a lot less time and far more accuracy with lighting and shadows.

It'll be worth it for your next "idea" as well since you need a mockup, schematics, and model for 3D printing.

Most have free downloads for you to try out.

+1 for learning a 3D program. Blender has come a long way in the last couple years, and it's free, so it's another good candidate.

Using Photoshop for 3D is like using Word for logo design. If you have any interest in product design, learning some 3D is in your best interest.

[Squilly]

Originally Posted by MisterKeeks

Agreed. I could barely read it.

I was trying to tilt the font to the left but PS wouldn't allow me to render it anymore on the X, Y, or Z axis.

[Mac Kiwi]

The beveled text problem is, because you have the two words at different heights /angles, it makes it look like the text /words are sliding down a slope to your right.


Like someone else said make the pyramid pop but, try to work out what your pyramid is made out of first, then work from there to get your optimal result.


Instead of the shadow under the pyramid, I would try a bright colour to mimic a caustics type effect. Also your floor is reflective, so everything, including the text will be included in that global reflection.


Learning a 3d program is always a good move if you plan to move on from PS sometime.

[12dylan34]

Originally Posted by Squilly

I have a trial for C4D, don't understand the software at all. Know PS a lot better...

PS and real 3D aren't alternatives to one another. In a 3D worklflow, they compliment one another. You should know both. As far a specific 3D program, stick with c4d. It's the best choice for a designer's 3d program because A, it's really geared toward that, and B, it easier to learn than others. You can learn all you need about it on GreyScale gorilla with a lot of motivation.

In 3D, your work above would have taken like 15 minutes with accurate retractions and shadows. Also, it doesn't hurt to have motion design experience these days (with After Effects and c4d).

As for your work, it's a great start, but is like to see more contrast. Make the background nearly entirely white with just a hint if shading. It'll make your graphics easier to see.