newbie looking for some input

asthma · Dec 17, 2005, 12:33 AM

hey,

im 16 and when i say newbie im dead serious!! I started to mess around in GoLive last night for about a half hour and then it started to click and i built the site in about an hour the next day. its all built from scratch i have no experience in web design other than last night. im looking for some feed back and advice and anything that could be wrong (ie. its to busy) everything is a origanal peice of work that i built in photoshop everything except for the steve baulmer video and im not saying where i found that. remember this is my first time in website design front and back end, so please dont be to harsh. Thank You for your time!!! im looking forward to hearing what you guy's an girl's have for input!!

heres the link
http://homepage.mac.com/asthmaattax/

Sincerely,

Asthma

asthma · Dec 17, 2005, 12:27 PM

seriously im looking for any type of input good or bad! anybody, anybody at all?

Sincerely,
Dave S.

mkrishnan · Dec 17, 2005, 12:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by asthma

seriously im looking for any type of input good or bad! anybody, anybody at all?

Ummmm...

I think it should be "Get *an* effing life, Steve."

Seriously, nice first attempt! Keep coding!

asthma · Dec 17, 2005, 05:50 PM

this is the last update im going to tell about then im putting it in my sig. so until then let me know what you think this is my second site that has been published. Thank You for the input!!

mkrishnan · Dec 17, 2005, 06:06 PM

Your new look is really nice.

If you darken the grey and green XBoxey image on the ENTER page, I think it would be much better. Right now, the greys at the edges are still substantially above the brightness of the background black. If you make it so that you hit true black at the edges of the image, by darkening it and boosting the colors back, it will melt right in, and it will be mad.

bobber205 · Dec 17, 2005, 08:13 PM

Site looks nice. Good job.

My main complaint would be that the source code looks it was done not by hand.

My opinion is that hand written code always makes the best sites.

To get a true appreciation on website work, learn HTML, then CSS, then Javascript.

Good luck!

steveedge · Dec 17, 2005, 08:19 PM

Ok, Now that you know how...throw it away and start over, only do it a little differently each time, Throw away, start over,repeat weekly until you can control every aspect of site creation.

Or...just keep having fun.

homerjward · Dec 17, 2005, 08:21 PM

i dont get it.

asthma · Dec 17, 2005, 09:14 PM

hey thanks for all the comments!! this is going to be alot of fun making web sites and you guys are right i should learn html first. and i will be learning it in school pretty soon!

sincerely,

David S.

bobber205 · Dec 17, 2005, 09:42 PM

Let me guess.

You're taking a Desktop Publishing class right now, and 2nd semester is Web Development?

If so, do you go to my school?

EricNau · Dec 17, 2005, 09:56 PM

Don't leave such a big space between the "back" & "Home" buttons.

On page 3, make the background color black, to match the other pages.

On page 3 resize the top images so they are the same height.

Move the "this site presented by..." message up a little bit, so it fits in the blank spot created by the images.

Dec 17, 2005, 12:33 AM	#1
asthma macrumors newbie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southern Maine	newbie looking for some input hey, im 16 and when i say newbie im dead serious!! I started to mess around in GoLive last night for about a half hour and then it started to click and i built the site in about an hour the next day. its all built from scratch i have no experience in web design other than last night. im looking for some feed back and advice and anything that could be wrong (ie. its to busy) everything is a origanal peice of work that i built in photoshop everything except for the steve baulmer video and im not saying where i found that. remember this is my first time in website design front and back end, so please dont be to harsh. Thank You for your time!!! im looking forward to hearing what you guy's an girl's have for input!! heres the link http://homepage.mac.com/asthmaattax/ Sincerely, Asthma

Dec 17, 2005, 12:27 PM	#2
asthma Thread Starter macrumors newbie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southern Maine	Hello? seriously im looking for any type of input good or bad! anybody, anybody at all? Sincerely, Dave S.

Dec 17, 2005, 05:50 PM	#4
asthma Thread Starter macrumors newbie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southern Maine	update this is the last update im going to tell about then im putting it in my sig. so until then let me know what you think this is my second site that has been published. Thank You for the input!!

Dec 17, 2005, 06:06 PM	#5
mkrishnan Demi-God (Moderator) Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Grand Rapids, MI, USA	Your new look is really nice. If you darken the grey and green XBoxey image on the ENTER page, I think it would be much better. Right now, the greys at the edges are still substantially above the brightness of the background black. If you make it so that you hit true black at the edges of the image, by darkening it and boosting the colors back, it will melt right in, and it will be mad. __________________ Mohan

Dec 17, 2005, 08:19 PM	#7
steveedge macrumors member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Atlanta, Georgia	Input Ok, Now that you know how...throw it away and start over, only do it a little differently each time, Throw away, start over,repeat weekly until you can control every aspect of site creation. Or...just keep having fun. __________________ Steve Edge Café Edge Web Hosting & Design http://www.cafeedge.com

Dec 17, 2005, 08:13 PM	#6
bobber205 macrumors 68020 Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Oregon	Site looks nice. Good job. My main complaint would be that the source code looks it was done not by hand. My opinion is that hand written code always makes the best sites. To get a true appreciation on website work, learn HTML, then CSS, then Javascript. Good luck!

Dec 17, 2005, 08:21 PM	#8
homerjward macrumors 68030 Join Date: May 2004 Location: fig tree	i dont get it. __________________ Congress shall make no law...abridging the freedom of speech, or of the press.

Dec 17, 2005, 09:14 PM	#9
asthma Thread Starter macrumors newbie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southern Maine	thank you for all the comments hey thanks for all the comments!! this is going to be alot of fun making web sites and you guys are right i should learn html first. and i will be learning it in school pretty soon! sincerely, David S.

Dec 17, 2005, 09:42 PM	#10
bobber205 macrumors 68020 Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Oregon	Let me guess. You're taking a Desktop Publishing class right now, and 2nd semester is Web Development? If so, do you go to my school?

Dec 17, 2005, 09:56 PM	#11
EricNau macrumors Demi-God Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Sacramento, CA	Don't leave such a big space between the "back" & "Home" buttons. On page 3, make the background color black, to match the other pages. On page 3 resize the top images so they are the same height. Move the "this site presented by..." message up a little bit, so it fits in the blank spot created by the images. __________________ November is Pancreatic Caner Awareness Month www.PanCan.org \| Get Involved

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