Do you literally mean cross dissolves, wipes, etc? If so I think that's a style I am not so keen on myself and a lot of the videos that enjoy feature straight cuts and jump cuts.
Thanks for sharing though.
Having watched your video when you say tricks are you talking about effects and the like? If so it would have pulled away from the brief of creating a natural raw video.
There is a reason behind the silhouette so that shot had to be like that. It is intentional that there is very little detail on his face.
Straight off, stylistically I can tell you that this isn't the sort of video I am normally into. It was hard to pick out a strong narrative to follow through the piece and I couldn't justify some of the editing choices.
If I'm honest, I wouldn't have been able to tell it was shot on the BMCC. Knowing the great DR that camera has it seems that you have blown a lot of the highlights (in post? in camera?).
The grade is very strong and unnatural and again it just comes down to a different stylistic approach wanting to create a dream world I suppose. Given the brief I might have attempted to recreate a dream world in other ways. I'm not sure if it's intentional but the grade seems to change in the same scenes between the beginning and the end.
Some of the edits are a bit quick and not consistent. When the words flash up it seems out of the blue and is also a bit fast to take in what's happening, especially with the busy frame. I think the scene at 1:12 is slightly out of sync as well. 3:52 sticks out as well as there is no drum beat but clearly the drummer is playing. Same in the next shot as well.
Some of the handheld shots came across as a bit shaky, what rig did you use?
Shot selection seems a little limited IMO as well. It seems mostly to be wides and mids with not too many CU. We probably have very different shooting styles but I have realised that coverage is very important especially if the song can change after the shoot!
It seems we took the same approach of putting the money on equipment and then begging/borrowing/stealing the rest! It can be a lot of fun doing it that way but it is very stressful!
Since posting this video a teaser has been released for two further videos I shot last year so I'd love to know first impressions!
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