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Old Mar 2, 2006, 05:26 PM   #1
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Post Your Hip-Hop Freestyles or Verses

I dont know how big hip-hop is here on MR but I think it is a cool idea to share your lyrics with the rest of the members. Iīll start.

Verse, 12 Bars, 1 Life

Trapped in a world of paranormal, phenominal scenes
Surrounded by devils and demons i hear murderous screams
In these cocaine dreams i'm at a pause but i'm tryna move fast
It's killin me inside, i can feel my last gasp
My lost grasp, i'm slippin the ladder of life
My day falls, lost vision, i'm enclosed by night
It's like, everydays a new chapter, the dramatic un-told story
Fightin my darkest dreams as i try to stand in glory
My past is bein remembered but for all the wrong things
I changed my ways and i fixed my broken wings
Now i'm Remenissin my past, prophesisin my dreams
Emphesisin my life, still hearin devils screams
It's plain and simple, i'm the leader of this game
I ain't gon stop spittin until i'm dead or reach fame
We keep them 17's spinnin, smokin that purple haze
Pullin up at red lights lookin for girls to get laid
Back seat of the C, thongs down skirt up
Lettin your juices flow as we ****** but don't touch
Just ask Slick, he knows what we've been through
Just point out who you don't like and you know what i'ma do
We will survive through blood, sweat and tears
Fightin as one unit not backin down to our fears
I can't take this anymore, my life is to crazy
So i'm sayin goodbye like Em did to Slim Shady

Still pretty raw but Im working on it.

This next one is dedicated to my nan who passed aways this summer.

They say lifeís a test, but I know itís just a game
Itís just a shame the ones I love run outta credit, ma lifes lame
I'm runnin outta names in ma family, theyíve all passed away
So i'm livin for their lost lives everyday
They say itís a tragedy and weep so I stay strong
Even though Iíve been breakin up inside all along
Now all ive got is a pen and itís a curse cause it hurts
Explaining your pain makes life easier but the pain worse
I canít be a bad boy no-more i'm ma familys rock
Any suffering coming our way ive gotta stand straight and block
Cant handle no dope cause if i'm caught they aint a hope
No-one else will cope holding them up and climbin up this slope
Yesturday I saw ma father cry for the first time
He can no longer hold up ma world up and i'm next in line
Itís hard to admit, a part of me has died
But it makes me more determined to surviveÖNan I miss ya
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Old Mar 2, 2006, 05:44 PM   #2
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is there a good way to post audio files?
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Old Mar 2, 2006, 05:47 PM   #3
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is there a good way to post audio files?
I dont think so, I think you have to go somewhere like soundlick.com and sign up upload your audio there and post a link.
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Nothing special

hope the link works.
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Old Mar 6, 2006, 07:40 PM   #5
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Pretty damn good patmain, pretty damn good.
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