Critique: Trailer website concept.

Discussion in 'Web Design and Development' started by _bnkr612, Aug 3, 2006.

  1. _bnkr612 macrumors 6502a

    _bnkr612

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    Hey everyone!

    I have just started to develop several concepts (paper first) to the computer and I have one ready for a critique.

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    Details:

    This is trailer manufacturer for boats based out of Ohio (near Lake Erie). They need a dramatic redesign of their current site http://www.loadmastertrailerco.com/index.htm and I think I have been going in the right direction thus far. Links will be similar, I am trying to make it appeal to the demo. of 30-75 year old males without losing them. I wanted to make the trailers "to the point" and secondary stuff can come in on the navigation above "Select a boat trailer".

    They have not send me a logo (not completely finished yet by the other designer), so the banner is kinda just in placeholder mode right now.

    If you're wondering why the sunset picture is there, it's because they want a picture of it included. I did my best to include it but not have it create a visual issue with the rest of the design and it actually allows me to use the orange hue into the design.

    Anyway, take a look and let me know your thoughts.

    Cheers!
     
  2. bwanac macrumors regular

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    Mar 27, 2006
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    What with the big white space?

    Much better and much more professional. I can digg it. :D

    Port Clinton... Ive been there on more than one occasion. :)
     
  3. _bnkr612 thread starter macrumors 6502a

    _bnkr612

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    No love...

    No one will get a critique from me anymore!

    :D
     
  4. Coolnat2004 macrumors 6502

    Coolnat2004

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    I like it. It's clean, professional, and to the point.
     

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