How's my story

Discussion in 'Community' started by mmmdreg, Oct 17, 2004.

  1. mmmdreg macrumors 65816

    mmmdreg

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    Hey I cooked something up for English.. read it if you got time. It's theme is "journeys". What do you think?

    edit: for those who can't be stuffed changing the encoding, here's it in pdf
     
  2. homerjward macrumors 68030

    homerjward

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    i read through about the first page of it until the weird characters instead of apostrophes and colons and such got annoying but i know that's not part of the story. :p it's really good and paints a beautiful, if depressing at times, picture. what english class is this for btw? i wish we were allowed to use contractions in english:(--well maybe we are now--but in middle school we'd always get counted off significantly for using contractions. :
     
  3. iMeowbot macrumors G3

    iMeowbot

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    For the character thing: read it with your encoding set to MacRoman.

    Story: very funny, but the tomato surprise could use a little more ham :D
     
  4. mmmdreg thread starter macrumors 65816

    mmmdreg

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    Lol it's for creative writing. I wouldn't use contractions in a formal essay or anything but hey. Anyway, I think you have to read the entire thing as the last part is quite important to the story as a whole =) even tho the ending sux..

    edit: I added a link to the pdf in the first post for those who can't be stuffed changing the encoding..
     
  5. paxtonandrew macrumors 6502

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    I have a relative that is in Year 11 in Sydney, and this week were also given the 'Area of Study' (I Think) journeys. They are doing Physical Journeys, which i have to say sounds boring. There is a film study I believe, which is rabbit proof fence. The only reason i know, is my DVD of that movie has disappeared into thin air last week, and when I asked where it was, i was told. Are you doing Standard or Advanced English? My Relative is only doing Standard.
     

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