My site - Constructive Criticism welcome

Discussion in 'Web Design and Development' started by mrzeve, Feb 21, 2006.

  1. macrumors 6502a

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    Hey all

    www.staylazy.net

    I always worry about if the design is easy enough to get around and if its easy for people to find what they want, so please let me know!
     
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    Littleodie914

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    #2
    I like the images and all, but I'm not sure about the whole left side of the main part being an image. Maybe the screenshot could be a linking image, but I personally think that the features and text description should be just that: text.

    Other than that I love the top logo thing, that's sweet. :cool: :D
     
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    1macker1

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    #3
    Nice site. The only thing that really bothers me is the Grey text after the black "Introducing Canto Pod 2.1" text. It's too light. But other than that. Sweet.
     
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    superbovine

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    arf

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    #5
    Overall pretty clean, is there any way you can redo the left side as previously mentioned, at the moment it's one big image (~100K) and that seems excessive given the overall page load?
     
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    Sdashiki

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    #6
    Apple influenced eh?

    your layout of bold with the text paragraphs the way they are is so Apple.

    and the right side sorta cries the same thing.

    good job though, it has serious potential.
     
  7. Guest

    #7
    From an HTML point of view, you really need to have a DOCTYPE -

    Code:
    <!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Transitional//EN"
       "http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/loose.dtd">
    When you've done that, pop along to http://validator.w3.org/.
     

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