Poetry

Discussion in 'Community Discussion' started by Patmian212, Oct 8, 2005.

  1. Patmian212 macrumors 68020

    Patmian212

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    Apr 11, 2004
    Location:
    NYC
    #1
    Hey guys,
    I recently started writing poetry as a hobby. I am a bit of a writer, stories, lyrics and such. This is my first real atempt at poetry and I would like an opinion.
    BE GENTLE
    Unbearable

    I am a family, a spectrum
    There are seven of me inside me,
    Unbearable,
    Like seven beasts
    And the bluest of these keep whistling through its pipel
    But when spring comes,
    Dreams come:
    That I'm the eight

    Feel free to share your own poetry here aswell.
     
  2. eva01 macrumors 601

    eva01

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    Gah! Plymouth
    #2
    I know that PlaceofDis writes wonderful poetry. ^^
     

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