post your Apple haiku or limerick

Discussion in 'Community Discussion' started by johnee, Apr 11, 2007.

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    johnee

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    I would like to see the creativity of the people here in either haiku or limerick form.
     
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    johnee

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    here's two haikus

    red, bitten, juicy
    he creates what most can't see
    under a secret veil

    hidden from most eyes
    making what others blind to?
    we speculate. Doh!
     
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    Jasonbot

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    Refering to apples secrecy and rumoured speculation??
     
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    johnee

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    it's a pretty simple concept:
    1) choose to write a haiku or limerick, let's go with haiku
    2) decide on an aspect about apple you wish to express in a profound 5-7-5 syllable format
    3) write said 5-7-5 syllable format poem
    4) post it here :)
     
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    Writing 'bout Apple
    johnee clever, but too long
    line three holds extra
     
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    psycoswimmer

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    That's 6 syllables.
     
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    Jasonbot

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    un/der a se/cret ve/il (7)
     
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    iSaint

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    light of sleep awake
    bring me the MacRumors of the day
    to appease geekness
    :apple:
     
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    johnee

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    got this from wikipedia :
     
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    There once were two men named Steve
    Using too many chips was Woz's pet peeve
    Shareholders are glad
    the 'Pod's not a fad
    Apple's the best, I believe.

    I'm not too good at rhyming. :eek:
     
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    beautiful like snow
    falling on chyrasanthemums
    without wires you stream
     
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    Burning nylon thigh
    Fan rise, cry in protest
    Ah, the Macbook Pro.
     
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    psycoswimmer

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    I'm on a roll. The middle line is 8 (or is it 9? Not sure about MacRumors) syllables. It's 5/7/5 syllables, not words.
     
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    psycoswimmer

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    I stare at my Mac,
    loving its simple design
    hating the pee-cees.
     
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    psycoswimmer

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    Sure is. :D Was that an actual Apple commercial in the past?
     
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    When I walk into
    The Apple Store, I look at
    Beautiful products
     

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