Quick critique needed

Discussion in 'Web Design and Development' started by theNIC, Mar 12, 2010.

  1. macrumors member

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    #1
    Just as the title says, I was wondering if you could critique something for me.

    It's just a simple website I'm making for my neighbor as a surprise because I'm bored an she's really nice, haha.

    Well, here it is.

    Thanks
     
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    spinnerlys

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    You should change the colour of the font to something darker, as that light gray makes even reading the hacked and mangled version of Cicero's "de finibus bonorum et malorum" quite hard to read.

    Also the type face (font) you choose for the links on top is quite hard to read.


    What is the purpose of that page anyway?
     
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    adamvk

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    Change the font color!!!

    Changing the color of font is a must, I would change it to dark grey. Besides that though, the design looks very nice.
     

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