Quick critique.

Discussion in 'Design and Graphics' started by onthat, Jan 29, 2007.

  1. macrumors regular

    onthat

    Joined:
    Feb 26, 2006
    Location:
    Ruston, Louisiana
    #1
    Designed in Illustrator for the back of a deck of SOA sponsored playing cards, had to include logo and use the font provided. Final will be printed from a multichannel .eps file, two spot channels: PMS 186 C and PMS 877 C.[​IMG]
    sorry about the size:)
     
  2. macrumors 65816

    Lovesong

    Joined:
    Sep 15, 2006
    Location:
    Stuck beween a rock and a hard place
    #2
    Nice. I like the modern look, with the juxtaposed old-school shoes. One question I had was what that line down at the bottom (sorry, I didn't mean to draw on your work, I just wanted to point to what I was talking about):

    Also- If you look around the letters, there seems to be a bit of tracks (around the school logo and the "a"). I would either make them more pronounced or clean them up. Good job :)
     

    Attached Files:

  3. thread starter macrumors regular

    onthat

    Joined:
    Feb 26, 2006
    Location:
    Ruston, Louisiana
    #3
    Part of a concrete slab, not sure how I missed that...thank you so much, I was preparing to turn this in along with some other work on Wednesday.

    It will be printed from a press quality .eps file at 2.5"x3.5" so the tracks shouldn't be visible.

    Thank you for the positive feedback:D
    Very helpful!
     
  4. macrumors 65816

    Lovesong

    Joined:
    Sep 15, 2006
    Location:
    Stuck beween a rock and a hard place
    #4
    No worries, mate. It's what I do for a living.
     

Share This Page