Recommendations/Critiques?

Discussion in 'Design and Graphics' started by The General, Mar 14, 2007.

  1. The General macrumors 601

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  2. GreyFox1221 macrumors regular

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    I would (subtly) add the scroll wheel to the iPod. Up to you though, no biggie at all. Other than that its really nice.
     
  3. LeviG macrumors 65816

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    I'd take a look at the feet myself, the left one just looks wrong for some reason.

    Other than that, its ok but maybe not that original, the apple inspired design has kind of been done to death now.
     
  4. TheAnswer macrumors 68030

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    First off, every iPod I've bought and every iPod ad I've seen has said "Don't steal music"...so using the iPod here kinda goes against Apple's policy.

    Is that the Azureus logo near torrents?...the shape could be clearer. And there is a problem with that left foot.
     
  5. The General thread starter macrumors 601

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    Yeah the feet are what look strange too me. I don't know how to fix them, I'm not that great at drawing stuff.

    I realize that the iPod/Apple theme has been done to death, but I really couldn't think of anything better to do. I'm not too creative... I'm taking the class to learn how to use Photoshop, not to learn what to do in Photoshop. ;)

    But yeah, I found out that the image needs a photographic element, so I put it on a billboard:

    http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/4572/robinhoodbillboard1680xno9.png

    It looks so neon! I like it.

    If my professor doesn't like it, he can stuff it. :p
     
  6. likeavaliant macrumors regular

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    i think you need to tone down the brightness in the billboard picture. it looks too unnatural. other than that it looks nice... not the most original idea, but i still like it.
     
  7. emorydunn macrumors 6502

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    I like it. I think the green is a bit bright. Other than that, looks good.
     

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