What Do You Think of My Rap Lyrics?

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  1. Patmian212 macrumors 68020

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    Bravo young man

    I am totally down with these lyrics, yo. They be totally pimping. Fo sho
     
  3. applegirl macrumors regular

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    It looks good to me...I'd say probably 75% of the battle is if you have the skill to make it SOUND good. Have any links to sound clips (do you rap or only write lyrics)?
     
  4. Patmian212 thread starter macrumors 68020

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    Word, gee, aint into alot of gangsta rap more into rap which tells a story or chilled mellow rap like lost boyz style, remeber good rap doesnt need a whole lot of cursing.
     
  5. Patmian212 thread starter macrumors 68020

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    I ATTEMPT to rap I will post clips when I improve, I'm only 16 so my voice isnt deep enough a lot of the time.
     
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    Nice lyrics though. Kind of like the man in your avatar. Except add the story telling part
     
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    Nice lyrics. Make a beat and put them together then post it here. I'd like to hear how it sounds.
     
  8. AP_piano295 macrumors 65816

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    lmao
    as to the lyrics im not big on rap but I like some of it guess id have to hear it to music
     
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    If you are 16 why are you writing about being a veteran and war experiences? Just curious, I am not trying to be rude or anything. I would think most 16 year olds would rap about missing the bus and stuff...:D
     
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    No its alright, actually in the end its not about a veteran at all, and the story isnt about me its dedicated to a friend of mine who is 22 and is going through a rough time dont want to get into specifics but its just ment to convey struggle and strife, I will post more lyrics later, also I have a beat for this song but how do I post it on MR any free hosting options?
     
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    With music, I can't tell from reading the lyrics alone. I'd have to hear a song to judge it.
     
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    Okay, gotcha. Sorry to hear that about your friend. Open up garageband and get the song finished already. :p
     
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    Yes, and get working on the remix! :D I only listen to the remix. :eek: ;) :D

    EDIT: Check out macjams.com -- they host garageband music for free, I think. There are others too...there's been at least one thread here with someone's music that was hosted on a Garageband-oriented site. :)
     
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    OT, but I had a dream I had to have my spleen removed last night, thanks to you, buddy. :eek:
     
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    Uh Oh!! Maybe tonight you will have a dream about the Pulmonary Embolism I had after my spleen was removed!! :eek: Get ready for 2 weeks in ICU!! But, the good news is, you will live! :D
     
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    :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:
     
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    I am hoping I have a dream in which I own a Dual 2.7 and a 30" display!!;) :D ;)
     
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    oooo sooo tight dawg we ganna pimp da house! :rolleyes:




    I hate rap... Rap is crap with a silent c. :rolleyes:

    But, I love rock. We all have different tastes :).
     
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    :eek: :eek:
     

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