somewaht sleepless today. so therefore i looked at every single one.
one thing in general:
the images are too small to be nicely looked at.
here's what was on my mind when looking at the photos:
0: underexposed and nothing interesting too see: not the light and not the composition. looks like an accidental snapshot
1: too much to the side of those wales.
2: nice soft tones. the smooth green leaves work well with the grainy sand and rough wood
3: boring. again like an accidental snap.
4: show me more of that yellow bit and it might be nicer. colours are generally fine
5: if it was perfectly straight on and had some ligt around the edges this would be graphically nice.
6: it's crooked by a small amount which is deadly for this type of shots. needs a bit more contrast and maybe some WB tuning.
7: maybe exclude the top 10% of the frame
8: dramatic clouds. i'd try to bring out the glint of red/orange in the right for an even more dramatic feel
9: highly abstract golden, green something with super nice symmetry. this one is absolutely great.
10: although the same subject as before i like #9 better (because of the dark center line). it's still nice.
11: the light is too hard in this one. i don't like the shadowing
12: nice texture, but rather uninteresting interpretion. maybe include the bench into a scene with something extremely smooth for visual contrast.
13: good idea to show off glass with mostly brick. i'd try to bring out the green more for increased contrast.
14: too sepia with no real highlights.
15: too blurry/soft. this kind of thing needs super sharpness to bring out the edgy feel of the building. also some kind of dramatic sky could help. maybe go there again on a stormy day or near sunset.
16: still doesn't work
17: i remember this one
18: lovely texture. but this needs something to stir up the colour contrast. (some kind of object? weird lines?)
19: well, no. doesn't work for me. sky is too plain and building too cut. so nothing interesting can sho.
20: would work wonderfully if you had a T/S lens to shift the image plane in line with the bumpers. alternatively: bring out the yellow more (punch!)
21: i can see the white rimmed tire,which reminds me of old cars. this doens't justify the use of sepia and no contrast here. also the angele seems strange to me, plus not a lot of story is going on.
22: repeating things are nice. too bad the sky is pure white and kills the mood. otherwise nice.
23: ok, now soft light is there, but it's the no good light temperature. and the (not real) symmetry doesn't work here.
24
h yes, wet stone and green nature always work together. but i'd say this is way to close to the scence to appreciate it.
25: still not there
26: needs more interesting reflections in the windows, like a storm or sunset or sth.
27: oh #15 again. still needs more dramatic things in the sky. although sharp now, 15 is better.
28: too much of a snapshot and a lot of dust on that sensor right in the middle.
29: that is a wonderful combination of soft gold and stormy blue. the crooked horizon on the other hand is very distracting.
30: the colours are special and work very well together, but why is the bird looking out of the frame?
31: i like the foam bubbles, but i'd have removedd that shell. the foam alone works nicely.
32: no, this absolutely doesnt't work
33: soft cute colours. like the tones. compositionally i'd have put the wood on the lower side of the frame and not centered. that way the background fades more into nice soft bokeh.
34: wherever that was, explore that region more, as the light is very nice. the subject is not all that interesting and the background is very disracting.
35: show a little more of the left tree (green orange nice) and forget about the right one.
36: somewaht dull and no point of attention
37: same idea as #13, but this one won't work
38: this needs to be perfectly straight and a lot more contrast.
39: it's crooked and tells me nothing
40: can't exactly explain it, but this one is not interesting to me
41: too much foreground. i'd say give it some more steps and some more space on the right.
42: so extremely centerd that this probably nice wave looks unintersting and super small. also it would more dramatic if the wave came rolling from one side to the other and not back to front: shoot it at an angle
43: take this one again, but don't crop it this time and show more of water and sand. but give more space to the sand.
