Made an iPhone 5 Ad, want feedback!

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    toliy253 macrumors member

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    Looks good. Subscribed!
     
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    Thanks!

    I pre-ordered, so ill have an unboxing and review on friday!
     
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    Thanks!
    I think my videos have come a long way since I started, my new rMBP really helps me edit more efficiently, so I can bring out higher quality videos.
     
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    Not bad! I expect one of Apple's first commercials for the iPhone 5 to be close to this... Maybe you should get a job in their media dept! And I subscribed, can't wait to see the unboxing and review!
     
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    Thanks! I showed it to my family today shortly after I uploaded it, they thought it was the real thing, I would LOVE to work in their media department! and I will be doing one with similar quality to my Retina Macbook Pro review
     
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    Thanks!
     
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    Looks fantastic! It would be cool if there was a title shot of the iPhone 5 logo before the apple logo (and maybe a carrier logo after the apple logo for a more authentic feel)
     
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    on the website, they don't normally put those on, only on TV
     
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    you cut together existing footage from the keynote video, laid an audio track over it, and you think you made an ad? Sorry buddy..
     
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    Talk when you can do something even close to this.



    Goodjob, it legitimately looks like something Apple would put out.
     
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    Thanks so much guys!
     
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    I like it very much, it's well done, but is something Apple put out. It's their footage rearranged and condensed into an advertisement piece.

    Even so, I certainly respect the work and thought you put into it Macdude.
     
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    Thanks, and I know apple marketing will come up with something cool, this is just something I did to show my editing and also for fun for my YouTube channel
     
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    Where did you get the footage?
     
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    It came out if the promo video

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    Thanks so much!
     
  23. zachnelson macrumors 6502a

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    Can you explain what you did other than crop clips, transitions and match it with music? I don't want to undermine your work, and haven't watched the promo video.
     
  24. TM WAZZA macrumors 68000

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    Seems like a legit Apple ad.

    I don't really like Apple ads where it talks about features and stuff. I want the ad to just show it like this.
     

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