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mrzeve
Feb 21, 2006, 03:37 PM
Hey all

www.staylazy.net

I always worry about if the design is easy enough to get around and if its easy for people to find what they want, so please let me know!



Littleodie914
Feb 21, 2006, 03:47 PM
I like the images and all, but I'm not sure about the whole left side of the main part being an image. Maybe the screenshot could be a linking image, but I personally think that the features and text description should be just that: text.

Other than that I love the top logo thing, that's sweet. :cool: :D

1macker1
Feb 21, 2006, 04:46 PM
Nice site. The only thing that really bothers me is the Grey text after the black "Introducing Canto Pod 2.1" text. It's too light. But other than that. Sweet.

superbovine
Feb 22, 2006, 04:50 AM
Spell check your About page.

arf
Feb 22, 2006, 09:19 AM
Overall pretty clean, is there any way you can redo the left side as previously mentioned, at the moment it's one big image (~100K) and that seems excessive given the overall page load?

Sdashiki
Feb 22, 2006, 10:02 AM
Apple influenced eh?

your layout of bold with the text paragraphs the way they are is so Apple.

and the right side sorta cries the same thing.

good job though, it has serious potential.

littlejim
Feb 22, 2006, 10:11 AM
From an HTML point of view, you really need to have a DOCTYPE -

<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Transitional//EN"
"http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/loose.dtd">

When you've done that, pop along to http://validator.w3.org/.