thedude110 said:I think you do a nice job of evoking the wonder and playfulness of human beings as "discoverers."
I might take out the cooking scene at the end. The images are so much about the girl and the power of her frivolity -- the ending seems to really foreground the prop (rather than the relationship people have to the prop).
yeah. (good call) or have her smack her mean hand stealing brother with the hand.