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_bnkr612

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Mar 8, 2004
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This is a flash site for a class. Any comments or suggestions would be nice.

coiffur


Cheers.
 
its all right... a couple things I would do:
1.) make a mouse over of the buttons more defined. its hard to tell what is and is not a button.
2.) make a more defined info area. I cant tell from that flash where more info would go, id imagine the bottom, but still, it would help.
3.) speed up transitions a bit. people dont like to wait, especally if it could be instant.

other than that, pretty good bit of work.it has potential.
 
It's a confusing site. No clear indication of what is a button, what is not. Just too much info that's not very relevant to hair/hairdressing. I could easily see replacing some of the type with a simple illustration of hair locks that would blend into the background better. Becasue you use type as a design element, I didn't expect that clicking would do anything.

On an other note, your (assuming) other site has a typo. Please correct it, becasue no one will take you seriously. Navigatable is not a word, Navigable is. (See attached PDF)

Other than that keep up the work, you have an eye for pretty design, you just need to make more relevant and to the point.
 

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zarathustra said:
On an other note, your (assuming) other site has a typo. Please correct it, becasue no one will take you seriously. Navigatable is not a word, Navigable is. (See attached PDF)

I pray you are joking around there!
 
Wes said:
I pray you are joking around there!

Are you asking me whether I am joking about the typo? No I am not. If I were a potential client/employer, I would think twice about hiring someone with a blatant typo. I can tolerate small mistakes, but making up words is not too classy.
 
Bush is not classy.

zarathustra said:
Are you asking me whether I am joking about the typo? No I am not. If I were a potential client/employer, I would think twice about hiring someone with a blatant typo. I can tolerate small mistakes, but making up words is not too classy.

Fixed.
 
I agree with the previous poster, the buttons aren't very visable, because they are just text.

I suggest giving them a feathered background, but more of a hard feather, and then giving them an over state. See attachment.

scem0
 

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Thanks.

scem0 said:
I agree with the previous poster, the buttons aren't very visable, because they are just text.

I suggest giving them a feathered background, but more of a hard feather, and then giving them an over state. See attachment.

scem0


I will probably be taking that into consideration, they do need something more than just the text.

The girl is my girlfriend.
 
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