Design Critique

[Intel Inside]

Hey Everyone!

Here is a first design/mock up of a website for me. I have designed it to reflect me, and not to appeal to the masses, like the apple website, if you get what i mean? By the way, I'm 14 and this is my first try at designing a webpage in Photoshop, but i have used html before. So what do you all think? Do you have any tips or pointers for me? And, which is your favouite? Thanks a lot

So here they are... (click for larger)

 

[miles01110]

It'd help if you posted what kind of site this is intended to be. I can see it being ok for some things, but really bad for others.

 

[Intel Inside]

Sorry, i forgot to say. Its a personal site, not to advertise anything like a company site. Also it serves as an "experiment" for my first properly designed website.