How does this look?

[guyducati]

I'm working on making a website using Photoshop and iWeb.

How does this look so far?

I'm just in high school, and this website is to show my photography/architecture to people.

I used some paper gradients layered on top of each other along with a green gradient for the grass effect, and the "text" is my handwriting. The house is something that I rendered. (I'm going to study architecture next year)

 

[appleguy123]

I think that the house look too green-tinted.

 

[guyducati]

I think that the house look too green-tinted.

Ya, it is. I did that so it would "blend in" more with the grass. Otherwise it stands out way too much.

 

[stevegmu]

I don't like how the house has 2 entrances at the front. More than 1 is passe.

 

[guyducati]

I don't like how the house has 2 entrances at the front. More than 1 is passe.

There is only one entrance, it might just be hard to see. The entrance is under the porch on the left into the rotunda.

 

[appleguy123]

Ya, it is. I did that so it would "blend in" more with the grass. Otherwise it stands out way too much.

I think that it would stand out in a good way. And get rid of that grass unless you want to use it through the whole page. It looks out of place.

 

[citizenzen]

Okay... you like green. I can dig it.

Don't dig the grass textured background though.

I'd go for something with more contrast... less texture.

 

[guyducati]

I think that it would stand out in a good way. And get rid of that grass unless you want to use it through the whole page. It looks out of place.

Ok, I think that's a good call to make.

Okay... you like green. I can dig it.

Don't dig the grass textured background though.

I'd go for something with more contrast... less texture.

Do you mean the browser background? The browser background is a light grey FYI.

 

[citizenzen]

Do you mean the browser background?

No, I mean the horizontal bars with grass texture, like the one behind "MY NAME IS HERE".

 

[guyducati]

No, I mean the horizontal bars with grass texture, like the one behind "MY NAME IS HERE".

Ok, I agree. I removed the grass, and it does look much better now.

 

[stevegmu]

There is only one entrance, it might just be hard to see. The entrance is under the porch on the left into the rotunda.

It looks like there's a door on the left side, right of the column by the palm tree.

 

[cyberdesignz]

whole pic should not be greenish. It feels like that it captures by the camera with green lens. I think just green background would be a better idea.