Logo | Biz Card Critique

[digitalphotog77]

comments, thoughts, suggestions welcomed

 

[cgratti]

like it, clean and simple.. good choice of color if you got to decide.

 

[IgnatiusTheKing]

I like it, but it may be too similar to the MySpace logo.

 

[LeviG]

Sorry but the first thing I thought of when I saw that business card was dental practice. Not sure why I do but thats the first thing that pops into my head.

And I agree about the msn messenger/myspace etc similarity to the logo

 

[ChicoWeb]

Also think about the dye cut and budget. It takes on a hefty price tag.

 

[cgratti]

Sorry but the first thing I thought of when I saw that business card was dental practice. Not sure why I do but thats the first thing that pops into my head.

And I agree about the msn messenger/myspace etc similarity to the logo

I dont think its close enough to MSN/myspace at all. As far as dye cutting, its rounded corners, so its a pretty common dyecut and shouldn't be that much more expensive to make.

 

[klymr]

There is a typo on the second picture.

 

[SwiftLives]

I approve of the color scheme. It's also very easy to read and very well designed, which is something often overlooked in business card design.

As for the resemblance to the Myspace logo, I don't really see it.

My only suggestion - and this is pretty minor and subjective - would be to simplify the group of people. I like the idea, but I feel it's a bit too complex and distracting. Also - and this may not be a huge deal - I don't read the green person's head as an 'O'. Perhaps make the head the same size as the lowercase letters?

Even if you run with it the way it is, you have a very solid design.

 

[digitalphotog77]

Thanks!

Thank you for all the great feedback, the client really loves the design of the logo and biz cards too!