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magid said:
Hey guys, I just signed up with ASO.com and put up my site. I made both of the sites I have up pretty quick and would like some constructive cristisim on them and how you think I could make them better. www.zachmagid.com/zAm and www.zachmagid.com/ipodparts Thanks guys!

Well a 10 dollar dot com name is a good idea for them... Just an idea, you get more people and it looks better...
 
The first link:

The header image is a bit too stylized.

Second link:

The three pictures are all different quality. Ewness.

Other than that, I have no comments. :)

scem0
 
thanks guys

@macs r us, it would be great if you add my page to your bookmarks. I will be updating it when ever I can and hope to expand the small business I have as much as I can

MORE! I want to make these pages the best they can be
 
Yea thats good with me, looks like you have a nice little business coming from your site there.
 
looks nice, and sorta like apple history but about ipods which is cool, anyway i have to agree the images used need to be much better quality and all the same quality compression, other then that keep up the good work.
 
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