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This is "show invisibles," which can be invoked with shift-cmd-i, View/show invisibles on the toolbar, and also under the View menu. It's pretty important to know about this!
 
FYI (if this is your paper) the bolded red commas are comma splices :p

"They live, they fall in love, and they die" and "They are frightened, they are anxious, they are totally adverse to the idea"
 
FYI (if this is your paper) the bolded red commas are comma splices :p

"They live, they fall in love, and they die" and "They are frightened, they are anxious, they are totally adverse to the idea"

I wouldn't worry about the first one, it reads well and is common usage (IMO). The second one is a bit awkward though. I haven't read the linked text however so I don't know the context.

AppleMatt
 
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