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theok21

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Hello everyone

What do you think of the app description for our new application? It's going live on the app store any day now. The following text is basically the iTunes submission.

I'd love some feedback on the quality of this promo material, from anyone of you that can afford a few minutes . Is it too corny or something? Please be honest!!

So...here goes..



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cj6OscNPabE

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The only location bookmarking app that allows you to create a collection of points of interest by specifying your own custom fields.

The beach you found by chance last summer, that nice coffee store, your favorite skateboard places, bars, surfing spots, bike routes. Bookmark any type of place in the world.

Add custom fields to rate, describe and assign special features to a place (wave height for a surf spot, or food quality for a restaurant). In short, Create collections of anything that can be assigned to a location on a map.

Features include:


  • Create your own location categories
  • Add custom fields in any category
  • Search and bookmark any place regardless your current location
  • View your places on the map or in a list that you can search
  • Filter your places by category
  • Filter by custom fields
  • Share on Facebook or Twitter
  • Share by email or Text message
  • View the route to a selected place
  • Quickly find a location via address search
  • Export your places as a spreadsheet (excel file)
  • Backup/restore via email
  • Send your collection to friends that also use Pin Master
  • Advertisement free
  • Highly usable, streamlined interface. No unnecessary taps what so ever

The uses of this application are limitless. Here are some ideas:

  • Bookmark places you visit often for easy navigation on the go: Store, parking areas, bike routes, running trails etc.
  • Bookmark places you visit while traveling: restaurants, camping spots etc.
  • You can even showcase your whole life on the map and share it with your friends: Locations you have lived, Places you have worked etc.

We continuously update and refine our applications. Use the about screen inside the app to keep in touch with us and vote for next version’s features.

NOTE: Out of the box, the application offers full functionality but allows you to insert a limited number of pins. You can upgrade to unlimited pins through an in-app purchase.

The first 1000 people to add 50 pins win a mysterious prize… So hurry up!

http://oblivius.com
 

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Also, would you use an app like this? for location bookmarking that is
 
So, do you guys understand what the app does from reading this page?

http://oblivius.com/pinmaster

I'm just trying to get a feel for the average iphone's user understanding of the concept "location bookmarking" so that we can adjust our marketing meterial accordingly

any feedback is greatly appreciated
 
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