Please Make Sure this site Looks good...

[Macs R Us]

Hello Again,

After hours of work and help from "iMeowbot" and Ave13Co I have what I think a good main page but before I change it please make sure it looks good in your opinion.


Here the TEST Page to visit:

http://macsruscomputers.com/indexresep.html

The Main page now:


http://www.macsruscomputers.com/

 

[dotnina]

I couldn't get either of those links to load.

A little off topic, but I find it odd that your username (and this site, apparently) refers to a business's website. You're not trying to get us to shop at MACS R US, are you?

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Edit ...

Nevermind, I got the page to load. The links just need a bit of tweaking.

New site looks better. As a general practice, doing a "Click Here" thing is bad. You should make the product name (or whatever) the actual link. I think there's also a little too much whitespace at the top and lower left edge. Other than that, I think it's a good step forward.

 

[Mudbug]

Hello Again,

After hours of work and help from "iMeowbot" and Ave13Co I have what I think a good main page but before I change it please make sure it looks good in your opinion.


Here the TEST Page to visit:

http://macsruscomputers.com/indexresep.html

The Main page now:


http://www.macsruscomputers.com/

after a few seconds, and help from no one...
I get this:

Not Found


The requested URL http://macsruscomputers.com/indexresep.html<br /> was not found on this server.

and

Not Found


The requested URL http:// was not found on this server

but that's just me
wanna try again?

<edit>Well... shows what I get for being non-adventurous before shooting my mouth off...
these should work (you have something erroneous in your links)

link #1: http://macsruscomputers.com/
link #2: http://macsruscomputers.com/indexresep.html

try them apples instead. </edit>

 

[Archaeopteryx]

The site looks nice... id buy from it...


/off topic

Blueberry iMac

Description: This computer will include 19 applications in two software bundles. Fast enough to accomidate to all your needs!

Could you add wireless networking to that thing? I wouldnt mind getting something like that for pure web surfing.. I could put it in my kitchen to get recipies while I cook ( www.cooks.com ) or drink ideas ( www.webtender.com )

 

[Macs R Us]

well is this go to go for now??? I want to make sure first.

 

[wormed]

Personally I would never consider buying from a site without "square" links.

 

[flyfish29]

Yeah, links didn't work at top, but overall nice site. Not to jump on the spelling bandwagon, but I visited a few of your links and there is way too many spelling errors. stlll instead of still on the lisa mouse text is just one. by the way, how is the mouse still sealed if you have a pic of it unsealed...or is that a pic of another mouse?

I would write less text and be more concise in your choice of words...don't say the same thing twice in the same paragraph...see lisa mouse text for an example.

also, writing less text means fewer spelling errors.

good luck

 

[jeremy.king]

My only comment is:

I hope you are not maintaining all your inventory pages by hand. If you are, you may want to look into some DB driven data (PHP and MySQL work nice together) - it would make life much much easier.