Hey guys,
I recently started writing poetry as a hobby. I am a bit of a writer, stories, lyrics and such. This is my first real atempt at poetry and I would like an opinion.
BE GENTLE
Unbearable
I am a family, a spectrum
There are seven of me inside me,
Unbearable,
Like seven beasts
And the bluest of these keep whistling through its pipel
But when spring comes,
Dreams come:
That I'm the eight
Feel free to share your own poetry here aswell.
I recently started writing poetry as a hobby. I am a bit of a writer, stories, lyrics and such. This is my first real atempt at poetry and I would like an opinion.
BE GENTLE
Unbearable
I am a family, a spectrum
There are seven of me inside me,
Unbearable,
Like seven beasts
And the bluest of these keep whistling through its pipel
But when spring comes,
Dreams come:
That I'm the eight
Feel free to share your own poetry here aswell.
