Random Haiku Widget - Feedback Request

[darrengreer]

Hey all,

I've written my first widget, and am looking for some thoughts, ideas, criticisms, etc. The widget utilized DWR to pull random 5, 7, 5 syllable lines from an application I have hosted on my server. It then presents those random lines as a Haiku to the user.

Please, take a look at version 0.2 and let me know what you think.

 

[mkrishnan]

Haha, simple and cute. Might use a bigger font with drop shadow or outline and boldface. But very cute.

 

[darrengreer]

Haha, simple and cute. Might use a bigger font with drop shadow or outline and boldface. But very cute.

Points taken, and appreciated. I'm going to attempt to make my own background for it, instead of using Apple's examples. That will give me a little room on the font size I think. Thanks.

 

[darrengreer]

Again, thanks for the feedback. I've made a few changes.

• Increased the text size
• Added a text shadow
• Added some copyright generic information

Available here