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That was actually really good! I love the introduction method used at the start of the second one.

It's amazing how such a simple program can be so brilliant. I use it for any presentations I do at school, and the teachers love it.
 
Very creative. I'd imagine that there's less a feeling of "effects overkill" when watching the presentations in real time as opposed to the compressed vids. I've started using the motion for a few of my lessons, and found it really benefits conveying the message when used judiciously. I think the monochromatic, minimalist look really helped focus attention without being distracting in itself.

That, and it reminds folks you're not using PowerPoint. ;)
 
A better font would go a long way IMO

Seems a little too flashy and like JNB, it gives viewer the feeling of effects overkill....almost like you wanted to use all the effects options.
 
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