I agree; whenever I have audio of just someone speaking, every camera I've owned does a terrible job of picking it up. This was shot on an HV20, which is better than others I've owned, but it's still pretty bad. I've always planned to get an auxiliary microphone, and I really should now because this is my first camera with an external mic plug (believe it or not.) I saw a general purpose mic at SonyStyle last weekend about 2/3 the size of my fist for $99, but if I can get a lavaliere for $35 like the link above, I may just get that.
I think I'm going to fade out the vamp music after the bumper in my next one. It was a little too distracting.
I also agree with the framing; I recorded it that way so I could scale the video to a bigger size if I needed to (which I did), but I just never got around to it.
kjwebb said:
The graphics were okay, although I don't see the point of the last one. The intro graphics didn't fully make sense (90 SECOND WORLD).
I agree; 90 Second World was a stupid name, and that logo was one I made in about 90 seconds in PowerPoint. I made another video last week similar to this one, and for the bumpers, I made the motion backdrop white, and the program title, which I changed to "First News", wiped onto the center of the screen and was the same format as my lower thirds except it was larger and white text on red.
zioxide said:
Also, make your lower 3rd go across the whole screen. Having just a floating text box looks weird.
What do you mean by floating? My lower thirds were imitations of the ones seen on the international feed of CNN. I like the simplicity of them; some lower thirds on newscasts are overly distracting and impractical (Fox News Channel comes to mind.)
HCK said:
Also, instead of doing many stories, focus on maybe 3 stories you want to tell the viewer about and work on re-writing those so that they are interesting. Limit your newcast to around 1:15 or less. The important thing is to give the most amount of information in an entertaining way in the least amount of time.
My format is inspired from
this. Every story there has a maximum of two or three sentences, which may be a little too fast-paced. I've made one of these about every weekend, so I'm starting to work on my next one now. I was planning on making this one a little longer. The one I made last weekend (not this one) also included weather, but my problem was that they were current conditions, so it went out of date quickly.
Also, what do you think of my backdrop? It's just a photo of Manhattan I found on flickr and I added some black color stripes to it to make it look like a window. Some people have told me that it looks surprisingly real, while others have said that it's unsurprisingly fake. I don't usually like motion graphics keyed in behind a person, so I try and make it look like a real backdrop, but it's hard to find any backdrops, let alone believable ones.
It's good to see someone your age take such a keen interest in broadcast news! Good luck in the future!
Thanks. I'm not really sure what I'm going to do. I've always had an interest in broadcasting and from both sides of the camera, but I also do a lot of work with bands and videos of live performances. I've tried doing short films, but I always get frustrated at not being able to come up with a good plot or being short on resources (such as actors.) My sister is majoring in journalism and she's likely going to intern for the ABC or CNN bureau in Rome.
Thanks for the input!