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thedude110 said:
I think you do a nice job of evoking the wonder and playfulness of human beings as "discoverers."

I might take out the cooking scene at the end. The images are so much about the girl and the power of her frivolity -- the ending seems to really foreground the prop (rather than the relationship people have to the prop).

yeah. (good call) or have her smack her mean hand stealing brother with the hand. :p
 
iBlue said:
yeah. (good call) or have her smack her mean hand stealing brother with the hand. :p

As much as I originally wanted to change the ending, you can't argue with your actor if she wants to "get some new shoes."
 
iBlue said:
there's always bribery, if you're so inclined. ;)

At that point, she was so tired of filming, bribery would do nothing. Or else it would have to be a really good bribe.
 
You sir, have inspired me to get back into video making.

utterly brilliant :D
 
I liked it too :)

It actually reminded me of a music video with the one song playing the whole way through. (Ha ha - just realised the connection between the band name and the video :D )
 
Well I enjoyed it. Like others have pointed out I think the camera techniques were awesome, wonderful choice of music. I am not a filmmaker, so I can't really tell you what was bad. From what I see, you have the camera down, maybe you could put together some stories and get some actors and make a short film.
 
maestro55 said:
Well I enjoyed it. Like others have pointed out I think the camera techniques were awesome, wonderful choice of music. I am not a filmmaker, so I can't really tell you what was bad. From what I see, you have the camera down, maybe you could put together some stories and get some actors and make a short film.

Funny you should say that, because I am currently working on the script for a longer short film. I'm not going to say much else, except that I think you guys will like it when its done.
 
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