I can tell you're editing your pics, I would further edit your sports section down, especially the portrait frames, they either repeat some of your better landscape shots or they are awkward in their cropping.
Also if you keep them in, don't stick them in as an afterthought at the end. In fact, you're saying nothing new with them, ditch them actually. Every image has to say something different to the next one to show what you can do. So don't repeat yourself.
I disagree with cinch, you've clearly labelled the sections on your site. If you remove the portraits from sports it might re-address the imbalance cinch is alluding too, but it does seem you are a stronger sports photographer than anything else.
Especially when your journalism images are much weaker when compared.
-First you haven't captioned any of your pictures, we as the viewer need context.
-Second, you've shot one event and tried to create a journalism section, while you have a variety of shots of that event (which is great) you need more journalism projects.
-Third, anything not relating to the protest just seems placed in their to bulk that section up, they aren't up to the same standard. I would remove them, again they say nothing, and they tell me you didn't get anything also useful from the other events, otherwise you would have shown them.
Lastly your portraits I feel are your most considered section, I would remove the sports ones or the ones where you do not have the subject's attention. They need to be looking at you, otherwise it's just a picture of a guy with a guitar, which anybody can do (which isn't even in focus on the guy).
Keep at it though, this work is much better than a lot of the stuff I usually see here AND you're shooting people, something which plenty of photographers avoid, so well done there. Also the fact you bought a portfolio site tells me you're serious about doing this.
This is my portfolio site, you don't have to give me feedback. But it's an example of how I structured my work/projects. I don't even have a portfolio section yet as I feel it's not strong enough, nor do I feel my free running work is either. I'd rather not show any of it until it works as an essay. I've been working on the free running project for two years now as well.
I would say you have the ability to shoot sports no problem, but go find something to document over a long term, you'll learn more and you could have a photo essay. Also remember to caption your images, people need context.
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