Hi Cara. Good to see you're getting lots of help. I do like the changes your designer made. It's easier to see the message being given. One thing I would ask him to try is to give a little bit of a curve to the tail of the word bubble. It might give the design a bit more of a focal point and bring the "language" message out just a bit more. You want to control where the viewer is looking as much as you can. The order should be:
1. Word Bubble = Language
2. People holding hands = Helping people
3. Company name
Or you may even want to try having the company name first. Hope this helps!